Space: Above and Beyond
and Misc. Scenes
When I write a story, I can start and re-start it a good half-dozen
times before stumbling on a beginning that works. Here, for your
amusement, I am posting a few of false beginnings. None are beta-read.
Heart And Soul
Before I nailed this story down, it had a number of widely
varying beginnings. When I first started it, I originally had Gary and
Alvin (from THE WILD HUNT) in it. The story got a little too crowded so I
wrote them out (and into their own series) but here, for your enjoyment,
are some of those beginnings.
Beginning One: is an alternate beginning
of HEART, originally called KOMEESEE
Scene One: is a continuation of Beginning One.
Scene Two: is another continuation of Beginning
One, this one with the Wild Cards.
Scene Three: yet another continuation of Beginning
One, again with the Wild Cards.
Scene Four: Yes, another version, one of the
first, I think. In this one, Gary had a different name.
Beginning Two: an entirely different version.
Here are some miscellaneous beginnings that don't really
go with either of my current series, though they do have elements of HEART