False Beginnings and Misc. Scenes
When I write a story, I can start and re-start it a good
half-dozen times before stumbling on a beginning that works.
Here, for your amusement, I am posting a few of false
beginnings. None are beta-read.
Eve is a prime example of this. Below are six separate
beginnings for this story, All of these beginnings contain
excellent scenes that may appear in some form or anything
(especially the scenes where Eve gets Adam to pay his bar tab.
Or not.). A word of warning: beginning six has spoilers for the
version I eventually used.
And here are three version of what eventually became A GLASS
HOUSE Revisited but was originally called REDEMPTION. None are
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